ray of sunshine:
i basked in it's glory
warmed inside out.
glorious smile:
spread from ear to ear
rising sun.
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19 comments:
"warmed inside out" has it for me: the sun doesn't necessarily give warmth, does it? I like the idea of the sun as a smile in the 2nd poem. Makes me smile.
These made me feel happy. I had such a hard time with this week's theme and you have nailed it.
Ah, I love to bask in the glory of sunshines!
These are wonderful. The image of the single ray completely warming you is wonderful; so it the image of that ray as a smile. God bless.
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I loved the connection between the warmth of the sun and a smile - heart warming.
There is nothing like basking in the glory of the sun.
Short and sweet!:)
warmed inside out-- I love it! Two happy poems.
You put a smile on my facade!
pit of your spit
I love these happy sunny haiku!
I'm now smiling from ear to ear!
thanks for all your beautiful comments to me Ul.
I miss you too! ♥
Ah! Made me grin! Really nice.
:D
I don't really like sunshine, but I like your poems.
For warming, cheering poetry, I thank you. :)
Beautiful poem, excellent.
Oh, yes - the sun! How wonderful it is! And the smile is irresistible!
both equally as lovely... but that second one... ah... perfection....
both are excellent references to glory.. thrz nothin like sunshine or a smile to change one's heart...
..the haiku by itself is
a textbook.after reading the comments it is education..
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