Sunday, April 13, 2008

Glory



ray of sunshine:
i basked in it's glory
warmed inside out.


glorious smile:
spread from ear to ear
rising sun.
*****
In response to one single impression prompt.




19 comments:

andrée said...

"warmed inside out" has it for me: the sun doesn't necessarily give warmth, does it? I like the idea of the sun as a smile in the 2nd poem. Makes me smile.

Raven said...

These made me feel happy. I had such a hard time with this week's theme and you have nailed it.

WillThink4Wine said...

Ah, I love to bask in the glory of sunshines!

SandyCarlson said...

These are wonderful. The image of the single ray completely warming you is wonderful; so it the image of that ray as a smile. God bless.
Writing in Faith: Poems

watermaid said...

I loved the connection between the warmth of the sun and a smile - heart warming.

STP said...

There is nothing like basking in the glory of the sun.

Just someone said...

Short and sweet!:)

gardenpath said...

warmed inside out-- I love it! Two happy poems.

gautami tripathy said...

You put a smile on my facade!

pit of your spit

Teri C said...

I love these happy sunny haiku!

Lucy said...

I'm now smiling from ear to ear!
thanks for all your beautiful comments to me Ul.
I miss you too! ♥

keith hillman said...

Ah! Made me grin! Really nice.

Noah the Great said...

:D

I don't really like sunshine, but I like your poems.

Joyce said...

For warming, cheering poetry, I thank you. :)

Daniel J Santos said...

Beautiful poem, excellent.

tumblewords said...

Oh, yes - the sun! How wonderful it is! And the smile is irresistible!

paisley said...

both equally as lovely... but that second one... ah... perfection....

OneMoreBeliever said...

both are excellent references to glory.. thrz nothin like sunshine or a smile to change one's heart...

zoya gautam said...

..the haiku by itself is
a textbook.after reading the comments it is education..