snug under the layers
thoughts dirty green
boggle the mind, while
slithering like the snake
warning racket,
causing havoc,
within!
thoughts dirty green
boggle the mind, while
slithering like the snake
warning racket,
causing havoc,
within!
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In response to the prompt from Friday Fives
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I haven't had a chance to say hello and make posts over the past few days, it seems like the rest of the week will be slow as well. But I will be visiting you soon...in the meantime, stay safe. Happy Blogging. I hope to free myself up soon and then get back in the game, miss you all much. Hope you are well, thanks for all the wonderful comments
6 comments:
I was just thinking about you yesterday and how I hadn't seen you around. It's good to have you back. You've made a good, fresh start with this poem. And, you haven't missed any of the fun that's coming up for National Poetry Month. I will have a post everyday next month for your writer's soul. Take care, UL.
I love that you focused our attention inward. Sometimes I think green is the wrong color to describe just how invasive jealousy is. Glad you were able to write today.
Havoc! How I love that word - you've made a masterpiece of the prompt!
I like it. The inner mind don't always stay calm.
Most of our torment is caused by our own mind. Humans are a strange lot. Thanks for this poem!
with few words you have spoken well of this crazy feelin that grips .. i thought i posted earlier... hmm maybe not... welcome back...
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