Out the door bright and early.
Surprised by the draft, oh so chilly!
Looked up - my eyes squinty,
Sudden my heart thuds sunny.
Looked up - my eyes squinty,
Sudden my heart thuds sunny.
For-
Cloudless upon morning sky
I tracked a jet's trajectory
Painter’s stroke brushed in glory?
Painter’s stroke brushed in glory?
Or angels train left in blurry!
Then -
Down the road I went hurry
Tickled my nose something flurry
Frozen lips smiled in funny!
Frozen lips smiled in funny!
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I wrote another kind of walk just the other day, check it out here.
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Other walks from Sunday Scribblings
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16 comments:
I thought maybe you saw a sleigh up above. :)
Rose
xo
This was sweet......I love angels train left in hurry.
beautiful winter imagery! I think I see a reindeer!
The first snow - how delightful!
I could imagine that..all your writings are very nice
I like that! Very much!
gautami
i love the playful feeling of this....
Whimsical...
I enjoyed that, especially as the snow begins to fall outside my window.
yeah cute! I liked the way it made me giggle..
that's so sweet. mornings have the best light, even in Winter and I could really picture that scene. :)
I love the whimsy upbeatness to your poem....makes me want to head outside and find "my frozen lips smiled in funny....."
this is fun!
"My heart thuds sunny" is a great way of saying that! I know I'll remember it every time I'm happy!
What fun! Love the rhythm, the rhyme and the joyful feeling!
Absolutely delightful and authentic in voice ....
jodi barone
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