Friday, November 30, 2007

Funny Hurry.



Out the door bright and early.
Surprised by the draft, oh so chilly!
Looked up - my eyes squinty,
Sudden my heart thuds sunny.

For-

Cloudless upon morning sky
I tracked a jet's trajectory
Painter’s stroke brushed in glory?
Or angels train left in blurry!


Then -

Down the road I went hurry
Tickled my nose something flurry
Frozen lips smiled in funny!
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I wrote another kind of walk just the other day, check it out here.
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Other walks from Sunday Scribblings
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18 comments:

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

I thought maybe you saw a sleigh up above. :)

Rose

xo

Jo said...

This was sweet......I love angels train left in hurry.

Lucy said...

beautiful winter imagery! I think I see a reindeer!

Robin said...

The first snow - how delightful!

arboleda said...

I could imagine that..all your writings are very nice

Just Jen said...

Very cool imagery, it's snowing like crazy here this morning and your poem was exactly like it was like for me walking out in my housecoat for my morning smoke. I even stood for a minute, catching snowflakes on my tongue!
PS. you are the only one who fully understood the million dollar line on my post...LOL
I think people took it as misspending but it's more of a 'it's never enough' so be thankful with what you do have idea...lol

gautami tripathy said...

I like that! Very much!

gautami

paisley said...

i love the playful feeling of this....

Rob Kistner said...

Whimsical...

Herb Urban said...

I enjoyed that, especially as the snow begins to fall outside my window.

Angel said...

yeah cute! I liked the way it made me giggle..

Devil Mood said...

that's so sweet. mornings have the best light, even in Winter and I could really picture that scene. :)

Whitesnake said...

original

Awareness said...

I love the whimsy upbeatness to your poem....makes me want to head outside and find "my frozen lips smiled in funny....."

Crafty Green Poet said...

this is fun!

Linda said...

"My heart thuds sunny" is a great way of saying that! I know I'll remember it every time I'm happy!

tumblewords said...

What fun! Love the rhythm, the rhyme and the joyful feeling!

Barone said...

Absolutely delightful and authentic in voice ....
jodi barone