Saturday, December 1, 2007

Guilty Pleasure.



Weather stormy, unplanned night.
Cease the moment, pop the wine.
Such rare duple, such rare sight!
Harbor the vintage, scheme online
Unfaithful, yet feeling fine.


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In response to the prompt at Friday Fives and
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5 comments:

tumblewords said...

I like this! Not sure about the form as I haven't looked at the 'instructions' yet! I'll bet it works and this is a great use of the prompt!

Michelle Johnson said...

Unfaithful, to partner or themselves? I like this. You can take this in two directions. One, an unfaithful lover or two, someone that's not supposed to drink but, does anyway. Nice write. Keep up the good work.

Yes, the form is correct. Though I am unsure if you can say only one stanza makes it complete. But, the instructions from the two places I took it from said you don't have to worry about length. It can be as long as you feel right for you. So, I still have to say yes.

I enjoyed this very much, either way. Keep up the good work.

lissa said...

Very enjoyable.

Whitesnake said...

Certainly different and I like it..

LittleWing said...

what a great little piece of writing..you told it so well...tho it makes me sad...being unfaithful but feelin fine...