edge of the precipice-
catastrophe barely delayed:
focus on the reins
circle’s focus,
know not of edge-
break-in delayed
delayed reflex-
lost my edge it seems,
time to focus
catastrophe barely delayed:
focus on the reins
circle’s focus,
know not of edge-
break-in delayed
delayed reflex-
lost my edge it seems,
time to focus
****
In response to the 3WW prompt.
17 comments:
Very clever word plays here - I like the first one best.
I too like the first one..
Good to see you posting again!
focussed on death
I love how these three play off one another.
Blessings,
Linda
Here's mine. (It's part of a meme response. You can find it, if you scroll down a bit.)
SUPER-SEVEN MEME, at Nickers and Ink
Nicely done. We've missed having you around :)
The first is definitely the best. You had some fun here.
The first one is also my favorite. It tells a mini story all by itself.
great imagery--can't decide between the first and third
my comment didn't take. I like the first also--matches my mood
UL-
Liked the first and third...the pic. reminded me of one of the last chapters in Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince book, where Dubmledore takes Harry to the prepice. Good one.
Its awesome:) glad to see you are 'typing away...'
feel like the third:) same here - have a lot to catch up;
Hi Ul! great to be back visiting you!
Excellent thoughts on the 3 words.
The visual is a nice companion & the poems, beautiful.
good to see you back UL... lovely pearls of wisdom
love the word play...
oh geez, it's good to see you writin... yr presence has been missed and hope you are doing well.... how often do we take the time to peer over the edge... and refocus... the images yr words portray i am still considering... i believe that photo is etretat, france... it is a beautiful spot.. near the normandie coast... i remember sitting on the cliffs, beautiful sunny day, soft breeze blowing smelling the salty air.. ah, not a care in the world...
These are very clever haiku UL. Here's to peace and relaxation.
Hi UL. How have you been? I see that you are still writing beautiful words :) . Keep up the good work!
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