entranced, the spectator follows every beat
a sworplay between equals, building heat
faces hidden beneath scarves, color of beet
faces hidden beneath scarves, color of beet
battling wills, first clash and then retreat
mutual respect shone as eyes meet and greet
attack and defend, both warriors so elite
an artform majestic, energetic and neat
sinewy movements with a grace discrete
entranced, the spectator cannot take a seat!
*****
For the last day of NaPoWriMo, I give you an artform I really enjoy.
10 comments:
Congratulations! that was great...a poem a day!
Congratulations! You are great! A poem a day and each one a masterpiece...
A great finale to your poem a day! I enjoyed every one of them
Awesome! The rhyming was perfect!
What a gracious words. My brother loves sword fights and swords. I just bought one for him for when he comes over end of the year.
I will show him your great poem
Brilliant!
each line is like a parry...the rhythm of this is fantastic!
swordplay was quite daringly poetic.
hey i'm so sorry i couldn't be here more often....
but looks like u too hav ebeen busy...
and congrats(a lil late , i know)...on completing your 30 poems...
:)
You haven't died and gone to heaven or some other place have ya?
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