stage is set
actors in place
touching scene
plays its pace -
starting at the
beginning, till it ends.
for each spectator
looking deeply in :
visibility spectacular
acting real -
where beginnings begin
with endless ends!
life is such,
as you will agree:
different views,
different worlds,
depending on the
beholder's eye -
full of beginnings
with no visible ends.
*****
In response to 3WW, and Michelle's 'different views of the window'
13 comments:
love the closing stanza on this ul....
i like it, nice take on both prompts
I love the ending - "no visible ends" - so true.
This was so beautiful. You said it so right....all beginning with no sight of the end..
I loved the last stanza especially... makes you think.
The ending clinches it perfectly!
green-eyed monster
'No visible ends'
I'm thinking mystical, searching. It is the journey that is important. If we ever reach the end, what then?
Excellent poem!
UL- Good one, especially the last stanca..keep the thoughts coming.
I like the interplay of beginnings and endings. The first verse is like an incantation.
This spins so well - no visible ends is a perfect end! :) Love it...
Ooh! A nice play!
Great piece. The world is indeed a stage on which we act out our lives
It made me think of the "life is a play, the world your stage" quote. At least I think that's a quote.
You always use such beautiful language.
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