slippery cool to my skin,
gurgling musical to my ear,
fragrant breath to my nose,
healing nectar to my tongue-
i love to see your face
just for a moment, just once.
you quench my thirst,
gurgling musical to my ear,
fragrant breath to my nose,
healing nectar to my tongue-
i love to see your face
just for a moment, just once.
you quench my thirst,
you fulfill my need:
you are life-giving,
quite simply the best.
i feel you, i sense you,
i smell you, i taste you
i long to see you, meet you.
just for a moment, just once.
does it matter what color
you are? if i could see,
if these eyes of mine
could see, like i see
in my mind's inner eye,
you will be the color
of the rainbow for sure.
so maybe it is best
that i am blind and cannot see
for surely my dreams would flee -
if i see you, meet you face to face
just for a moment, just once.
you are life-giving,
quite simply the best.
i feel you, i sense you,
i smell you, i taste you
i long to see you, meet you.
just for a moment, just once.
does it matter what color
you are? if i could see,
if these eyes of mine
could see, like i see
in my mind's inner eye,
you will be the color
of the rainbow for sure.
so maybe it is best
that i am blind and cannot see
for surely my dreams would flee -
if i see you, meet you face to face
just for a moment, just once.
******
I did two prompts in one, this in response to
Sharon's "What color is water?" from a blind man's
perspective as well as Michelle's 'I've never seen the face'
11 comments:
what a great response to the prompt... i have been playing with this one in the back of my mind too... but nothing i have imagined was this lovely.......
The first stanza was brilliant! I loved the descriptive verse.
The poem had an overall unreal feeling to it.
this was beautiful.
That's a pretty cool poem. Nice.
I love the way you brought all the senses into play.
UL, this is beautiful. I love how you used every sense and had one repetitive line to secure your poem. I enjoyed reading your take so much. Have a nice day.
Interesting connection of ideas.
Refreshing!
Gemma
wow!
You see poetry in every being UL..it is brilliant. keep poeming everyday beyond poetry month..
shy
How do you do it? Another inspiring poem.
Great write! I like it.
It is so cool; your take on that prompt is so lovely. and the flow of ideas are great! impressive!!
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