eyes met and words flowed
across the crowded room.
Question asked, answers given.
across the crowded room.
Question asked, answers given.
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I think I might add to this more,
maybe more haikus put to gether.
for now here it is.
In response to the prompt from One Deep Breath.
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13 comments:
That's beautiful - very intriguing! Happy holidays! Hope you have a wonderful new year.
I love the take on the prompt... "questions asked, answers given" - nice! :)
this was refreshing... i have so had it on the x-mas prompts... i didn't even do this one.. maybe i should.....
I love the idea of this going on...a wonderful start with lots of word room. Nice!!
This is very sensuous. I hope you do add to it!
Yes, I can relate very well to that
This is a lovely piece as it is, but it's crying out for a teeny bit more!
Beautiful haiku. I can see this opening up more also. Hope your Christmas was a good one.
There's something for you at "shades of mj" if you would like to stop by. Have a nice day.
This is terrific! I love the mystery to this.
Have a hopeful and inspiring new year!
very sweet! please add more
hope your holiday were bright :)
hmm..i love it just as it is...inspiring...and your photo like chocolate syrup on a sundae...
i would love to see where you take this...it reminds me of meeting my husband :)
An apparently long story written in too minimal words. A seem to be series of scenes achieved in brevity. The mind writes the rest of the story. Your words are thought provoking and I believe readers would agree to this.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
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