Wednesday, December 26, 2007

Silent Giving



eyes met and words flowed
across the crowded room.
Question asked, answers given.

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I think I might add to this more,
maybe more haikus put to gether.
for now here it is.
In response to the prompt from One Deep Breath.
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13 comments:

paris parfait said...

That's beautiful - very intriguing! Happy holidays! Hope you have a wonderful new year.

hanulf said...

I love the take on the prompt... "questions asked, answers given" - nice! :)

paisley said...

this was refreshing... i have so had it on the x-mas prompts... i didn't even do this one.. maybe i should.....

tumblewords said...

I love the idea of this going on...a wonderful start with lots of word room. Nice!!

Sandy Carlson said...

This is very sensuous. I hope you do add to it!

Crafty Green Poet said...

Yes, I can relate very well to that

keith hillman said...

This is a lovely piece as it is, but it's crying out for a teeny bit more!

Michelle Johnson said...

Beautiful haiku. I can see this opening up more also. Hope your Christmas was a good one.

There's something for you at "shades of mj" if you would like to stop by. Have a nice day.

get zapped said...

This is terrific! I love the mystery to this.

Have a hopeful and inspiring new year!

Lucy said...

very sweet! please add more
hope your holiday were bright :)

LittleWing said...

hmm..i love it just as it is...inspiring...and your photo like chocolate syrup on a sundae...

qualcosa di bello said...

i would love to see where you take this...it reminds me of meeting my husband :)

jeques said...

An apparently long story written in too minimal words. A seem to be series of scenes achieved in brevity. The mind writes the rest of the story. Your words are thought provoking and I believe readers would agree to this.

I wish you well.

~ Jeques