Friday, December 28, 2007

Drunk Ranting.



Hear you people, my New Year resolution
Drunk as I am, might forget this solution
Here’s my pledge to save my wealth,
No more smoking to rescue my health
If nothing my intention, less pollution!
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Every now and then people make these drunken promises
that they find difficult to keep, let's hope you and I stick with
the promises we do make for New Year's.
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A third attempt at limerick, please find the haiku here,
both in response to the prompt from Mad Kane.
Comments and criticisms welcome as always.
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Also in response to the prompt from Sunday Scribblings
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11 comments:

paisley said...

that is a promise i could make and keep... but know i won't!!!!

happy new year!!!!!

Linda said...

This made me smile. Been there!

gautami tripathy said...

I like that! It rings so true! Make the third and fourth line in a limerick shorter.

Wish you a very happy 2008!

gautami
rediscovering

tumblewords said...

Great 2008 to you! This is a cute batch of words. Love the resolve!

lissa said...

sounds like a good resolution.

Have a wonderful 2008!

Redness said...

Sounds like a plan ... do you want ice with your? Happy 2008 xx.

Lucy said...

What about No More Drinkin! haha Good one UL!
Have a Happy 08!

fmtv2 said...

I love your limerick, but I gave up New Year's resolutions years ago.

It seems that the amount of time that the "resolution" was in effect became shorter and shorter. After awhile I knew I wasn't so "resolved" after all!

Patois said...

Marvelously done. And for being able to make it a two-fer...I raise a toast to you.

forgetfulone said...

Great how it fit with both themes. Brought a grin to my face, too.

Thinking aloud said...

hey that was a good one...

Happy happy new year, UL...may it bring you joys and laughter...