Friday, December 28, 2007

Choice



Trace the gilt into unknown territory
Over the parapet then dead end, oopsy!

Time for direction, he stops in confusion -

His mind urges ‘to the doctor’s’
But the heart cries ‘distal Scrivener’s’!


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In response to the prompt from Friday Five
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6 comments:

tumblewords said...

over the parapet - ooopsy
too cool - I thought these words were a little tough - AGAIN. Grin. You did well!

paisley said...

you guys are too quick!!! i am still in the let the words feel real to me stage,, and you are all already posted!!! love it UL!!!!

Michelle Johnson said...

Wonderful effort. Loved over the parapet, dead end, oopsy! Isn't that the way it always feels. Have a nice night.

Love the new look.

lissa said...

Love the first line (trace the gilt...)

this was a tough one for me but you did well.

mariacristina said...

Maybe because of the picture of the pencil and the wrong turn, but I had an image of someone trying to find his way out of a maze, on paper.

LittleWing said...

great take on the prompt!!