precious time slipped,
a million times
bitter words exchanged,
a million times
soulful tears fell unnoticed,
a million times
hurtful remarks smeared,
a million times
pricey moments melted,
a million times
worlds altered, lives changed-
once more, I am alone.
a million times
bitter words exchanged,
a million times
soulful tears fell unnoticed,
a million times
hurtful remarks smeared,
a million times
pricey moments melted,
a million times
worlds altered, lives changed-
once more, I am alone.
****
In response to 3WW prompt.
11 comments:
This gave me the sense that whatever we do, we end up back where we started.
so sad Ul, Hope this is fiction.
nice use of the words. :)
Yes, we are always left alone, aren't we? Well done!
That's beautiful... I love rhymes:)
- glad to see you back in action!
You were missed!
there's truth in those last words, we might end up alone in the end but is the end really all that important?
I don't know, makes think how lonely life can be sometimes
Beautiful, simply beautiful..
and so true..
Oh UL, this is so sad! :( I hope it's fiction.
I understand well what she's going through though.
this was brilliant...and very true too
i'm so glad i'm back...
Ul-
good to see you back with another one so soon...profoundly sad poetry, but, a good one.
it is so nice to see you writing again... you have been missed.. makes me wanna cry.. as if layers of thoughts peeling back exposing your perfect oneness.. writing is a beautiful tool of expression...
We are always alone we just sometimes think we are not!
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