remember the good old times
funny how the world chimed
theatre cost just mere dimes
not money but people primed
times have changed, full of crimes
not people but dollars primed
winds betray, altering climes
hearts vanish, heavily grimed
life tastes like tarty limes.
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In response to the 3WW prompt
13 comments:
Nice rhyming... Love it, amazing range of ideas.
Hi UL! Good rhymes and I loved the last line. lol
nice rhymes, makes you wonder what the good ole days will be for this generation of kids.
The last line is perfect. Isn't it sad that we don't prime anymore. Nice work.
This is absolutely newsy! Love it - love it.
- better than lemons I 'spose!
Great poem. And so true!
And great rhymes!
LOL!
slow demise
Times certainly have changed in deed.
really enjoyable but sometimes I think we perceive much more crime
New York is much safer than it was when I was a kid yet everybody acts as if it's not
Ooh, rhymetastic.
i agree.. the taste of life is bittersweet at best these days.....
'life tastes like tarty limes'...love that! eloquent & catchy verse.
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