Monday, January 21, 2008

Visions



Impossible dreams –
Belief in being fruitful:
Strategic planning!
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Angelic beauty,
The vision heavenly -
She dazzled me!
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Future glimmered –
Clear and bright
An unpolished diamond!
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Escape tricky
From pond to ocean,
Dreams the hopeful frog!

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All different versions of 'vision' for the
prompt from One Deep Breath
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13 comments:

tumblewords said...

A great combination of haiku - the final one is cute as cute can be. All are visual and offer lovely thoughts!

spacedlaw said...

You've gathered all sort of visions there! I will admit a partiality for the hopeful little frog (must be because I'm French!).

paisley said...

this is wonderful ul... one just better than the next... how do you do it????

Chris said...

I LOVE them!! "Dreams the hopeful frog" -- WONDERFUL!!!! They read as one poem, because of the "hopeful" frog, an "unpolished diamond," having "Impossible dreams" of being kissed by an "Angelic beauty" -- maybe you meant it that way… maybe I'm loopy...

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Sian said...

I love the idea that the future is an unpolished diamond! Succint but intruiging too :)

Sandy Carlson said...

What I would do for an unpolished diamond!
Writing in Faith

Roswila said...

Fun series. That last is particularly fun and also touching. :-)

qualcosa di bello said...

a lovely collection of interpretations!

jadey said...

I like this a lot very imaginative and creative.

LittleWing said...

there is hope everywhere for tomorrow in these 4...thank you

Jodi Barone said...

Bountiful and beautiful post. Your work is special. I imagine you writing your haiku by hand first, in a beautiful journal. Perhaps there is a brief sketch of that angelic beauty you referred to....thanks! jodi

Pearl said...

someone needs to tell kermit that ocean salt is bad for his skin... :)