His rhythmic snores –
Quite musical if not tired,
Keeps her awake!
Her grinding teeth –
Non-musical even if tired,
Keeps him awake!
Together, in-between –
They catch heavenly sleep
To travel through times, where –
No grinds or snores
Disrupt beauty sleep!
Thank goodness –
They compliment each other
Disgusting as it seems!
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In response to the SS prompt as well as in response to the WI prompt
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23 comments:
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Great poem UL, the ups and downs of partners.
Rose
xo
What a great way of coming to terms with all those noises! Dreams are the best get-aways!
haha Not disgusting At All! To quote Robin Williams from one of my all time favorite films(good will hunting).... "THiS is all the good stuff about marriage"
its ok... i sleep with the tv on,, so i'll never hear a sound..... very cute ul....
I can relate. My husband snores louder than anyone else I've ever heard. It's interesting that I never wake up because he is snoring...but I sometimes wake in a panic because he isn't.
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The very first guy I ever spent the night with snored HORRIBLY. New boyfriend or not, I was ready to stuff my dirty socks in his mouth by 2am!
LOL!complementing pair..a foil for each other! :)
My next door neighbour complained about my snoring! Anyone would think it was loud.
my partner used to grind his teeth, now he's stopped that but snores instead...
So clever - traveling off to silent time! Love it!
You put the two ideas together very well - really got your teeth into sleep.
ha ha ha....love the snoring part. Usually the time travel in sleep is always an adventure. Nice post.
That is why God created the ear plug, great poem.
this was great!!!!
and a cat wrapped around my head is about all i can manage sharing my bed. although i have been subjected to both snoring and teeth grinding.
it seemed no matter how hard i jammed my bony butt into the offender? the concerto continued.
Ha ha ah ah
I think that is what marriage is all about and that is why I am single. Very clever rhyme.
Not disgusting at all! I find this quite sweet and honest. I loved it!
yeppers, im a grinder... big time and i sorta snore softly.. love conquers all... another great one...
yeppers, im a grinder... big time and i sorta snore softly.. love conquers all... another great one...
hehe. Too funny! I love to travel at night, in dreams. Often, in dreams I can time travel, too.
UL, this has to be the best one I read in WI this week, what a clever use of the prompt :)
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