Friday, January 25, 2008

Sinking



a belief in the unknown,
failure to cohere the known
lone dandelion etched on glass
create nothing but a big farce
immerse in chasm of my own!



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In response to the prompt for Friday Fives
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9 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

Nicely done. I have to wonder if the person in the poem will come away from her lowly place and rejoin life again? Have a nice weekend.

paisley said...

in my own little corner in my own little chair i can be whatever i want to be........

my mantra...

tumblewords said...

lone dandelion etched on glass - I really like this image! Nice work!

MsRose said...

I'm new to comprehending poetry..that said, I thought it was very nicely written and it is true-that some stand still while everyone else is living...does everyone have a time like this?

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

I felt this more than truly understood it, UL, but for me, to have feelings evoked is more important than always understanding the words. I was the same way with my own poem this week....

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Cute..look through the glass you can see a beautiful World !!
TC
CU

UL said...

Thanks for all these comments...this was a very interesting prompt.

Ms Rose, thanks for stopping by again, I believe everyone does have a time like this...

LittleWing said...

i found this rather interesting ... is all about believing in oneself...

MsRose said...

Sometimes standing alone,helps you believe in yourself more than ever before.

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