Friday, January 11, 2008

Clean-up!



Brush thorough your conscience
Leave no room for evanescence
Swallow the pride, leads you blind
Ugly thoughts that prey your mind!

Cease the moment, don’t regret
Floss out the dirt, do not fret!

When good and ready, turn the key
Drive into the world, time to party
Experience emotions, intense-hearty
Return full circle, happy-smarty.

Brush and floss twice a day
Guard the soul, forever stay!


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In response to the prompt from Friday Fives
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9 comments:

lissa said...

Cease the moment, don’t regret
Floss out the dirt, do not fret! -- a action we all so follow.

Michelle Johnson said...

eads you blind
Ugly thoughts that prey your mind!
I think this line stood out most for me because I get ugly thoughts in my mind sometimes and I think if we let them they could easily take over. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice weekend.

paisley said...

ul this is great,, just sing song enough to be fun,, but a very real message at the same time... i love it....

tumblewords said...

I like the rhythm of this - makes it easy to remember the message - it sticks to the cells! Fun and true!

keith hillman said...

You are clever! Excellent piece.

Thinking aloud said...

WOW!!! sounds simple but such a beautiful message...
verrry clever use of the words!!!

Just Jen said...

Oh I like this! Very creative!

Marja said...

Guard the soul, forever stay. Excellent Happy to read your great work again

LittleWing said...

what a great little dittee..so very creative...and those last two lines yeppers...that's a keeper!!