Friday, August 1, 2008

Madness



temporary insanity:
i omitted my karma
to gamble with the devil-
predictable outcome:
i sank even deeper
into permanent insanity.


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In response to the 3WW prompt

9 comments:

Mampi said...

Wow, it has to be destiny...

I was reading Edgar Allen Poe's THE BLACK CAT, and here i come to read your poem ending in the words "permanent insanity". Strange co-incidence this.

about the piece, nicely composed and well done. Hats off to your creativity.

mitr_bayarea said...

UL-

temporary insanity-a, that is an interesting way to put it. good one, as always.

Lucy said...

Ul!! long time since i've visited you! Wonderful
poem my friend. great use of the words! :)

anthonynorth said...

Ah, but one person's insanity is another's sanity, I often find.

Tumblewords: said...

I so enjoyed this piece!

Marja said...

from temporary insanity into permanent insanity Better not gamble with the devil. Great piece

Anonymous said...

Good to see you back at blogging. I like this!

Creativity

TC said...

This is cute, and something I feel like I can relate to!

Hope you're doing well! We miss having you around! :)

ramblings said...

beautiful usage of words! will come back for more.