Sunday, April 20, 2008

Bravery



Don’t be mere survivors,
heroes are true revivers -
fight your darkest fears
triumphs always have ears!




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In response to the WI prompt, I think I will take this further, but for now, here's the
draft as I consider it.

7 comments:

Just someone said...

I don't know why - somehow this seems really appropriate for me today - was gripped by some irrational fear - cant really put a finger to it, but... now, if the draft is this good, what is the final going to be like?

Rambler said...

"heroes are true revivers "

great line UL..

anthonynorth said...

Very true. It is always best to fight your fears. Or they fight you.

paisley said...

there has to be a time of rest between surviving and reviving i think... but it can be done... very nice verse....

Tammy said...

I agree with rambler UL and hope to see what you add.

Rob Kistner said...

Do take it further, I like the foundation you've constructed here...

Manpreet said...

Very inspiring.
I have been following your poetry for quite a few weeks now. ANd I happened to like it. I hopped in from Roop's. Guess what? I even linked you a couple of weeks back.
Keep it up.