Sunday, March 16, 2008

Encircling


mine and yours
souls perfectly so -
new circle begins

from you to me
and me to you
our life circles

half my faith
half of yours
circle completes

eternal bonds
across lifetimes
circle sustains


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In response to the prompt from One Single Impression

16 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Love is circle! For eternity!

insanely inconclusive

SandyCarlson said...

Makes me think of the Mizpah medal. This is a beautiful poem.
Writing in Faith: Poems

spacedlaw said...

Good sequence.

Raven said...

wonderful love poem... I like the title too. Very nice.

Mad Kane said...

I like them all!

Andrée said...

eternal bonds across lifetimes . . . brought tears to my eyes. It's that kind of day of memories. Thank you.

Thinking aloud said...

so used to seeing something new everytime i come here....this was a long break by your standards...hopefully its just work that's keeping you, and nothing more...

this reminded me of the circle of love, which we wear on our finger...as usual very very nice...

Marja said...

eternal bond across lifetimes. Circle sustains. Beautiful line beautiful poem.

STP said...

I feel a rhythm to this piece that is circular in and of itself. Very easy flow to it.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

These are lovely love Kus.

WriterKat said...

I like the last line, it holds the piece together so nicely.

Ps said...

Beautiful one--blessed indeed is the union of these souls.

tumblewords said...

How lovely and so circular! Very nice!

Krissie said...

just perfect!

Patois said...

Once again, you've done such a marvel with the ku. The series is divine.

OneMoreBeliever said...

love in a circle...beautiful thoughts