mine and yours
souls perfectly so -
new circle begins
from you to me
and me to you
our life circles
half my faith
half of yours
circle completes
eternal bonds
across lifetimes
circle sustains
souls perfectly so -
new circle begins
from you to me
and me to you
our life circles
half my faith
half of yours
circle completes
eternal bonds
across lifetimes
circle sustains
*****
In response to the prompt from One Single Impression
16 comments:
Love is circle! For eternity!
insanely inconclusive
Makes me think of the Mizpah medal. This is a beautiful poem.
Writing in Faith: Poems
Good sequence.
wonderful love poem... I like the title too. Very nice.
I like them all!
eternal bonds across lifetimes . . . brought tears to my eyes. It's that kind of day of memories. Thank you.
so used to seeing something new everytime i come here....this was a long break by your standards...hopefully its just work that's keeping you, and nothing more...
this reminded me of the circle of love, which we wear on our finger...as usual very very nice...
eternal bond across lifetimes. Circle sustains. Beautiful line beautiful poem.
I feel a rhythm to this piece that is circular in and of itself. Very easy flow to it.
These are lovely love Kus.
I like the last line, it holds the piece together so nicely.
Beautiful one--blessed indeed is the union of these souls.
How lovely and so circular! Very nice!
just perfect!
Once again, you've done such a marvel with the ku. The series is divine.
love in a circle...beautiful thoughts
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