clear skies
artist’s canvas
bright sun,
fair moon
opposite corners
sharing grounds
rising day
fading night
glorious battle
both victorious
dawn’s tinted watercolor
a message without words:
speaks oh, so loud and clear
artist’s canvas
bright sun,
fair moon
opposite corners
sharing grounds
rising day
fading night
glorious battle
both victorious
dawn’s tinted watercolor
a message without words:
speaks oh, so loud and clear
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In response to the prompt from TOP. I think this fits the
Friday fiction prompt too, an encoded message from the skies. :)
16 comments:
you painted a perfect picture of the glory in the sunrise..
Now that made me feel all nice and warm.
Lovely.
Another nature poem. Nothing like it..
jumping from the cliff to prove my love?
God!!! That was so beautiful and well-written. Perfect way to start a day :)
Lovely, lovely...a message of the first order.
I'm glad I stopped by, this was lovely. I'm getting stronger from this flu. :)
Oh, that's really good.
The best messages are those that don't need words.
I really like the rhythm and tempo in this one...nicely done.
A message without words, what a great concept..
I like your minimalist approach in this one, and the concept of the skies as an artist's canvas
So often on my way to work, the sun is shining and the moon is still visible. Your poem perfectly catches that moment!
I just went straight outside and looked up into the bluest of blue skies, and there they both were. Thank you for a lovely verse.
I could feel the day's new sunshine upon my face. Beautiful.
i very much like the thought of day & night both winning!
I guess we get messages without words all the time!! I went with one sent by another person, but all messages don't come from people, do they?
Morning, noon and evening editions all have something new to say. The morse code of a starscape can sens a very powerful message.
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