Friday, December 21, 2007

Prematurity



skin and bones at first sight really,
a part of me ripped out early –
my heart flooded and overflowed.
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In response to the prompt from Mad Kane
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7 comments:

paisley said...

oh ul,, this was so tender.. just loved it!!!!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Sounds like love to me!

lissa said...

how sweet! you brought the emotions quite nicely.

Just Jen said...

Are those a real picture of the little feet? They are so cute!
Have a good Christmas!

Sian said...

This was powerful for me. Thankyou.
(my twins were prem too)

Mad Kane said...

Very nice! Thanks for joining in on my latest prompt!

Compassion Unlimitted said...

absolutely tender as said elsewhere..lovely expressions in just three sentences!!
Seasons greetings and Happy New Year
TC
CU